(what?) (okay imma see) *scrolls* WHAT THE HECK!

It's also my first experience of finding those kind of people. 😅 I wonder why they say it's hate comment when it's sound logic and reasonable critics. Just because it's fantasy, nay... Exactly because it's fantasy, world building and logic according to its own world settings are important to maintain suspension bridge of disbelief. It's doesn't have to be the science and common senses according to our world. But, they can't say one thing about someone/something then say different tune about it in another time.

Girl, why are you so aggressive? Honestly, the commenter below was expressing disappointment not hate. Also there are some reader who can't turn off the logical part of their brain when they read. Some people want to be smarter after reading a novel. That's the original purpose of literature btw. Not to make people dumb. I honestly had to let my brain cells sleep reading this. I enjoy some parts of the story but I had to roll my eyes from time to time.

I agree with you, Minichan, I had to let my brain cells to stop functioning reading this novel, I personally love it and love its main characters, the only thing I find difficult to read is the logic in it, like, it keeps saying “thousands of enemy soldiers died”, but, how many thousands are there in 3 million, no, even half of that, and they still got 800,000 live soldiers after the whole battle, like, at least say hundreds of soldiers, that is a better amount to count in 2,200,000 deaths in the whole battle. But, I still love this novel and I’ll continue to read it, just my personal opinion. 😊😊😊

The reason i prefer fantasy over detective novel is so i can just read without minding logical aspect? Well, true there are many point that missed in this novel.. but even I don’t always notice unless reading the comment.. what i want to say is.. r u reading a right genre?

The one below was expressing disappointment not hate. All their points were logical it wasn't like they were saying "fuck your mom". Like calm down love. It was valid critsism.

To those who say that the person below was just expressing disappointment: I don't think using so much strong and offensive language is appropriate for merely expressing disappointment. We are here to read and enjoy a *fantasy* novel. If you want to point out a few plot holes sure but to be offensive about it is not good for the rest of us. Even the most glaring plot holes can be overlooked if you enjoy the story. I may take flak for this but the Harry Potter series of books has shown that.

Thanks for your opinion, goodbye!?

Didn't this guy say he will drop this novel? Why is he still ranting using another name? Whatever! Read more

Y'all may spew shit on the person who left this comment, but his points are very logical. The author made all magical beasts unable to stand tall in front of mythological beasts from the get go. The long xuan empire was even considered the best among the 4 cou tries cause they had the 5 clans with the very rare mythological beasts. Now they somehow pull out 20ish mythological beasts for the war. And the other beasts don't just fall flat on their bellies from the aura they give off, but even attack them. Logic? Got eaten by the dogs. They were saying at the tournament for the barren land that high level beasts are super rare and hard to make a contract with. Even if this whatever called auction places had them available, one had to have the resources to buy them from there. Now that SYX managed to get 700 hl beasts, somehow the other countries also got thousands of them.... Logic? What's that? They said the army of hight level demons is equal to second stage professionals, which are very very very rare. When the BSP attacked SYX with 30 of them in twilight city, she even said that its unheard if for there to be so many of second stage in one place. But somehow the 4 countries managed to kill through the army of 18.000 second stage professionals. Logic? Not here. Read more And the examples can continue. If you guys want to pick on people pointing out the flaws in the story, at least find something to pick on. Don't just randomly say something. Cause this is the story your author is presenting. As for why I'm still reading even though I can't stand sacrificing logic in favour of the plot, why that is of course because I ran out of completely translated novels. Show less

You guys do understand that this IS a fantasy novel right? So what if their isn’t much logic, drop it then.It’s not like the novel can’t survive without you, they have lots of other readers apart from you. And like, the mythological beasts do make the high level and mid ones bow but if they have a contract in theory they will listen to their master’s orders. And they understand that if they stop fighting and bow down they WILL die. :I Read more

You guys do understand that this IS a fantasy novel right? So what if their isn’t much logic, drop it then.It’s not like the novel can’t survive without you, they have lots of other readers apart from you. And like, the mythological beasts do make the high level and mid ones bow but if they have a contract in theory they will listen to their master’s orders. And they understand that if they stop fighting and bow down they WILL die. :I Read more

I completely agree with who made the comment. I do enjoy this story, i think it has great merits and i absolutely fell in love with the characters, but this arc seriously pissed me off. It contradicted with many facts the author declared in the earlier chapters. And although, yes, this IS a fantasy story, it's still pretty bad writing to just shit on logic and leave plot holes. Im just hoping the next arcs would be more enjoyable ;<

Go away pemenantly then

Hope you never appear in any novel ever again with all your hate

@YueXie thank you! I’ve wanted to say that to these types of commenters for so long I’m so happy you did it for me! Hopefully you actually end up reading this at some point.

I totally agree with all your points. I love the book and the characters. I won't drop it since I'm enjoying it but this arc was seriously the worst writing I've ever seen. Did the author even plan it? It hardly made any sense. Very disappointed. I'm going erase this arc from my memory and pretend it never happened because what the in fuckery did I just read.

I agree with all this guys points but it’s just a novel so imma just ignore it’s problems and enjoy the read 😊