It's like a kid writing a story about kids. No details, messed up order in conversations, absolutely nothing about time, just pereodically reminding that mc is older now
HandsomeRansom11 months ago
I know right. The story idea is great and nice but the execution is severely lacking.
Yodathethinker4 months ago
Stop complaining its okie how its made we alk think in our own way
Kuro Alicia1 month ago
No details give me so many question every single bits lolAnd messed up talks really take your brain cellBut still readable, for now...Read more
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