I feel bad for the tl. Must be tough, but you work is appreciated.
han_ass_solo1 year ago
I feel bad for the tl. Must be tough, but you work is appreciated.
han_ass_solo1 year ago
I feel bad for the tl. Must be tough, but you work is appreciated.
han_ass_solo1 year ago
I feel bad for the tl. Must be tough, but you work is appreciated.
FoxReader42112 years ago
It's like a kid writing a story about kids. No details, messed up order in conversations, absolutely nothing about time, just pereodically reminding that mc is older now
HandsomeRansom2 years ago
I know right. The story idea is great and nice but the execution is severely lacking.
Yodathethinker1 year ago
Stop complaining its okie how its made we alk think in our own way
Kuro Alicia1 year ago
No details give me so many question every single bits lolAnd messed up talks really take your brain cellBut still readable, for now...Read more
Locher11 months ago
This is a common problem when an author writes a story without having read many books themselves. This very difficult string of conversation, coupled with little to no exposition and descriptions of their surrounding (only stuff like 'they eat dinner now, they arrived at a camp site, they are training) makes me assume all author read are manga. This is manga-style storytelling.
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