It's like a kid writing a story about kids. No details, messed up order in conversations, absolutely nothing about time, just pereodically reminding that mc is older now
HandsomeRansom9 months ago
I know right. The story idea is great and nice but the execution is severely lacking.
Yodathethinker1 month ago
Stop complaining its okie how its made we alk think in our own way
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