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Currently Offline2 weeks ago
might be a short chapter but this is one of my favorite chapters so far, I really felt how Tania was handled in the beginning was shock value but as she was mentioned more later on I felt that she would return, although I expected a revenge or "ill do anything for you to notice me" plot. I do think Tania will understand Noels message, she doesn't seem like an idiot and probably will obsess over everything he said.
Solo2 weeks ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, Currently Offline! Well, we'll have to see in future. I do wonder what the author intends to do with her.
nnnl2 months ago
I don't like this piece of worl. I would drop it right now, but the thing is, the story is actually quite interesting. However, consistency and other qualities are also important to a work of literature, novels, etc.. And the consistency and character development are some of the things that make this interesting work, very low quality - outright bad. If these things were better, this could easily be a good work, but the flaws are too large. Isn't it ironic, how at the same time the mc is criticizing leisha, and calling her stupid, that he was so oblivious and blind, towards tania's feelings? And not only that, but he is STILL oblivious to the feelings of love from the people who adore him. So on one hand he is saying leisha and others are stupid, but at the same time, it's HE who is too incompetent to fully hrasp the situation. Read more Read more Not only that, but he'a always boasting about HIS abilities to see his OWN faults and strengths, etc., and assessing OTHERS are how they can accurately or not, judge themselves (ex: the new clerk), but here we can finally understand - ESPECIALLY after how he handled this chapter, and the things that were revealed in this chapter - that when he was criticized earlier by leisha and alma for not understanding women, they were not joking, but pointing out a very real flaw. But he waved them off as joking and not knowing anything. But in the end, the girls were RIGHT, tania DID love him. It's so unbelievable and badly written. He says he understands himself perfectly. He says he can accurately judge himself and his flaws and imperfections. He says he's such a great leader - and he totally lambasted Leon for being a bad leader. Yet here, we can see how ALL of those things are not only FALSE, but he's nothing but a HUGE hypocrite with a terrible personality. He says he's so smart? Compared to WHOM? The girls? From WHAT standpoint? A good leader? As opposed to WHO/WHOM? Leon? Let's not forget that if he's so smart, then how come he couldn't even understand something so simple, that people he constantly belittles as idiots, were able to perceive? Being girls is one thing. But what about WALTER??? EVEN HE UNDERSTOOD TANIA AND HER FEELINGS AND ACTIONS. EVEN LEON. So EVERYONE in his party understood the relationship dynamic(s), the inner turmoils of each other, EXCEPT for the MC. From WHAT standpoint is he smarter than anyone else? From WHAT standpoint, is he a better leader than Leon? Than Lloyd? He criticized leon for being blind to his teammates feelings. What about him? He's always saying and preaching about how to be a leader how he's a good leader. But if we are operating by HIS LOGIC, and how HE CRITICIZED LEON, then Blue Beyond literally fell apart, not because of Lloyd or Tania, or their gambling, but because of NOEL. NOEL, and HIS INCOMPETENCY. Whatever happened to being a good leader? Whatever happened to trust? Whatever happened to understanding each other? LMFAO. Whatever happened to relying on each other??? Blue Beyond's accounting, how come Lloyd and tania were able to embezzle so easily? Whatever happened to managing the party? Noel simply pushed all the responsibility onto Lloyd because "he wasn't the leader". But HE was the one who recruited lloyd in the first place. EVERYONE knew NOEL was the heart of the operation. Even Wolf from lightning bite. So he just pretended that his own teammates were so stupid that they couldn't even understand something an OUTSIDER could see FROM A GLANCE??? What kind of trust is that? What kind of leader is that? How come when tania and lloyd were so depressed from being in Noel's shadow, how come Noel couldn't see that? How come when lloyd and tania became addicted to gambling, how come he couldnmt see that? All he does is preach about how he's perfect, but it's all bullsh**. And this isn't an intentional setup by the author. It's CLEAR that this author is just going to walk away and pretend like nothing's wrong. Because that's how stories like this go. A betrayal in the beginning or conflict, then it's smooth sailing, and then it's overcomplicated, muddled and extremely confusing political bullcrap, because these authors have never actually done any real politicking in their lives. And then they end the story. It's always like that. Noel isn't going to suffer like Leon did. Noel isn't going to LEARN anything like leon did. Noel never even LOST ANYTHING, even from the beginning, with Blue Beyond. Noel has always treated his teammates as expendables. He doesn't care about kouga, or alma, or hugo. Just like lloyd, and tania, and walter, they're just tools for him. He literally said that without alma, or his current team, with the old Blue Beyond, he would have reached the same place he is now. This is really ridiculous. The story is interesting. I won't deny that. But this story is ATROCIOUSLY written. Show less
nnnl2 months ago
Work*, not worl.
nnnl2 months ago
Even walter, and Lloyd*, not leon, my bad, it was confusion, I meant to say lloyd, not leon.
Solo2 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, nnnl! Welp, that's a lot! Well, I respect your opinion! I'll just point out that you can't take what people say at face value. Sometimes, people say what they don't really mean and hide their true feelings. Noel does that a lot, by the way. Read more
hakkun463 months ago
Now i think the reason lloyd want tania not because he love her or because he want tania to support him. But because he can't stand that noel is above him and got some beautiful women fallen for him so he tried to take tania for him self. Sorry if my english is bad
Solo3 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, hakkun46! No worries, your english is good! And yeah, Lloyd's problem is his pride. He can't stand being in Noel's shadow
AzaThom324 months ago
Still the whole scene is really well written, and pleasant even if is a bit out-themed.... the whole scene is going to come back and hunt down the Mc in the short future...
AzaThom324 months ago
Omg what blunder! Hoped for female bickering between them and I got a ranting of unrequited love! Sure he leaves a door open for her since he picked also her up but asking a contorted person to set themselves straight is like to ask them to live back their lives... and she also fails to get the sight of the rope he threw! But was also that a stolen kiss????
Solo4 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, AzaThom32! (´・ᴗ・ ` )
Dwarf Legend4 months ago
why author used hot breath... is tania some dragon-kind race. well feel pity for her goodbye tania....
Solo4 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, Dwarf Legend! Haha, meant to imply passion I suppose
Oram4 months ago
i can't hate her, I don't like her but I can't hate her.
Solo4 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, Oram! Yeah, it's complicated, isn't it?
WULF.I-BL8CK-I4 months ago
He a king to his own but king need people to rule so prove yourself that u worthy to become one
Solo4 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, WULF.I-BL8CK-I! Hopefully, we'll see if he does that...
QuiGon054 months ago
(ಥ﹏ಥ)
Solo4 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, QuiGon05! (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ
FilipinoWeeb5 months ago
i feel bad for tania when she said ''.....love you.So much that i could die.....I love you'' ;(
Solo5 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, FilipinoWeeb! Yeah, it's pretty sad...
Gylsera6 months ago
Tania!!! Oh god, he's giving you a hint, A HINT!!! Pls someone tell herrrrrrr!!!
Solo6 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, Gylsera! ヽ( ̄ω ̄(。。 )ゝ
originalbot8 months ago
Tough love imo that or he's just being real great chapter thanks
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, originalbot! My bet is on tough love. =)
Jecker8 months ago
Thanks for the chapter. And you basically summed up my thoughts. However it will be interesting to see if whether Tania will change to be the Wolf and if she does, then what will be the trigger.
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, Jecker! Yeah, I really wonder what the author will do.
Brgcn_038 months ago
Honestly Kouga was able to overcome the barrier to join but Noel basically says Tania desires to be bound by him so that's why she can't join. Even if she gets it she can't overcome it because she wants to be with him rather than being in the top clan. I hope she becomes a regular somehow. Her personality is bad but somehow i can't dislike her. I wonder why does he insist on being single so much. I mean his grandpa had a child right. Follow his footsteps lol
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, Brgcn_03! Interesting points. btw, his grandpa had a child after reaching the top. He's trying to do the same. Oh, I must have said it somewhere, though I cant remember where, but author has said that Tania will be appearing in the next Part as well, so she's prob a regular of some sort in future Read more
DvsB@std8 months ago
No way would author bring her back just to drop her within 3chapters or so. Sneaky author has something cooking. Though, sad that there aren't much chapters left. Read more
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, DvsB@std! Yeah it's sad that he decided to stop posting on syosetsu. You're certainly right about the author not bringing this up for no reason though I say more in detail. =) Read more
Solo8 months ago
^won't say, I meant lol
Izmil8 months ago
Thanks for the chapter
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting as usual, Izmil! d(^_^o)
Qao8iquet8 months ago
Thats a very good chapter
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, Qao8iquet! Credits to the author, he's really good!
FoxReader66818 months ago
I really hope she changes tries to get stronger! I can't hate on her anymore.
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, FoxReader6681! I do too. It would be a good redemption arc. Plus her and Alma would be funny
Butzd698 months ago
And now we wait. I wonder if this event is gonna be mentioned again in the following chapters.
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, Butzd69! Well, you'll have to stay tuned then! =)
YaBish8 months ago
I hope she shows up again, she’s an interesting character.
Solo8 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting, YaBish! I'm pretty sure she will. =)
ShadeLights9 months ago
Thanks for the chapter. What surprised me was Noel didn't reacted to contact. At least he's not like other characters who'd activate their virgin barrier
Solo9 months ago
Thanks for unlocking, reading and commenting, ShadeLights! Lol that's the first time I've seen that term and it's cracking me up.
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