So the author says that the 8 other students were mostly based on how lucky they were in finding the ingredients. Then the author says that those 8 are the top elites of the junior and senior class. Make up your damn mind. While both can be true, the way it's presented makes those two views mutually exclusive. Oh, and I loved reading another paragraph explaining that intermediate potions need 10 or more ingredients... because that totally hasn't been mentioned dozens of times already ffs. Oh, and couldn't the students just space ring snatch away extra ingredients? The Chinese scatterbrained writer syndrome is surfacing.
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