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R3ader5 months ago
I like how the author said that Xiu and the MC were clever to see a problem with only a mention of the situation... like bish pls. If you can't clearly write a situation where us as the readers think that statement, don't kid around and make it a statement. It just shows that the IQ of the character you're trying to write is higher than your own. Show don't tell. ... and it seriously wasn't that clever. Given the pheonix facts just mentioned they'd be mentally impaired to not see that something didn't add up. Lazy author continues to be lazy.
Rafaeus1 year ago
*Vermillion bird makes angry vermillion bird noises
DeviSF6 months ago
Ah, the red Angry Bird? 😗 😅🤐
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